tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post4332367727805053610..comments2024-03-28T21:54:07.709-04:00Comments on Humbucker Poems: tired monk chainsBrother Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-76677701442056700342011-05-26T09:16:53.507-04:002011-05-26T09:16:53.507-04:00Great Poem Ollie, I really enjoyed the subject mat...Great Poem Ollie, I really enjoyed the subject matter, reminded me of my spiritual path in terms of being Catholic, all churches are locked now, no where to pray, but the small chapel, it seems some like to put God in a small place, but alas, he is within my heart. Peace and Stay Creative.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-64664788507018480732011-05-11T13:58:45.696-04:002011-05-11T13:58:45.696-04:00Brilliant poem. Love the last lineBrilliant poem. Love the last lineJack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-78513499187250943792011-05-09T18:47:13.803-04:002011-05-09T18:47:13.803-04:00great poem. love the last line the best.great poem. love the last line the best.Isabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630181168510791132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-1341954627006276952011-05-09T11:52:53.345-04:002011-05-09T11:52:53.345-04:00and some days children climb chains like ladders:)...and some days children climb chains like ladders:) or at least, i hope my monkeys do.<br /><br />xo<br />erinerinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-41846729341987962062011-05-09T07:34:14.989-04:002011-05-09T07:34:14.989-04:00Old Ollie,
Loved the idea of the 'locks withi...Old Ollie,<br /><br />Loved the idea of the 'locks within and without'.<br />A well crafted piece....<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-35053107211023791272011-05-09T06:55:43.153-04:002011-05-09T06:55:43.153-04:00It's very oppressive isn't it? Nothing a g...It's very oppressive isn't it? Nothing a good metaphysical blow torch couldn't handle, though.JZKnowles-Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09340158362187722378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-1544047285034584832011-05-08T21:03:50.116-04:002011-05-08T21:03:50.116-04:00What a surprise ending. That old monk is a prankst...What a surprise ending. That old monk is a prankster! Love the poem, I could feel the weight and coldness of those huge chains.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-60441790199587329232011-05-07T09:42:35.318-04:002011-05-07T09:42:35.318-04:00I enjoyed the mysterious allure of this - thanksI enjoyed the mysterious allure of this - thanksSheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-66341038128390596402011-05-07T08:50:38.041-04:002011-05-07T08:50:38.041-04:00i love the line "chained ghost thight". ...i love the line "chained ghost thight". pure poetry, man!Andreashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05129547380377962436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-52583526847449794542011-05-06T22:21:03.672-04:002011-05-06T22:21:03.672-04:00I love allthese takes on chains and especially lov...I love allthese takes on chains and especially love the last line!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-42086942880963463242011-05-06T22:20:58.974-04:002011-05-06T22:20:58.974-04:00The locks of the mind brother. Bust those locks. K...The locks of the mind brother. Bust those locks. Keep 'em coming OO.Human Paradoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14298152454302764517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-2028036641506719752011-05-06T14:19:56.788-04:002011-05-06T14:19:56.788-04:00come to think of it, i rarely lock things up. hmm,...come to think of it, i rarely lock things up. hmm, interesting.Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.com