tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post4480493836168111517..comments2024-03-28T21:54:07.709-04:00Comments on Humbucker Poems: Tired Monk - AutumnBrother Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-42043652606441479122010-09-27T00:04:43.313-04:002010-09-27T00:04:43.313-04:00I can feel the chill and crave the warmth, I love ...I can feel the chill and crave the warmth, I love the line "branches rise their burden released one leaf remains" so life like~ Beautiful~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-79002254423310440122010-09-26T17:06:07.475-04:002010-09-26T17:06:07.475-04:00ah, beautiful - I can feel the cold, the icy spray...ah, beautiful - I can feel the cold, the icy spray, the warmth of the fire...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-80554136175568801432010-09-25T09:58:19.829-04:002010-09-25T09:58:19.829-04:00cute piece...
beautiful Haikus.cute piece...<br />beautiful Haikus.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-28934560378073967762010-09-24T23:52:50.044-04:002010-09-24T23:52:50.044-04:00loved the sequence.. great haikuloved the sequence.. great haikuPriyanka Bhowmickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11658819351312019129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-76960094612684296042010-09-24T18:35:56.729-04:002010-09-24T18:35:56.729-04:00So well done........crisp, clear and cold.......So well done........crisp, clear and cold.......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-48575275659335694862010-09-24T16:05:48.366-04:002010-09-24T16:05:48.366-04:00Your vivid imagery has put us all there...beautifu...Your vivid imagery has put us all there...beautiful poem! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-35043832427691014282010-09-24T15:48:25.397-04:002010-09-24T15:48:25.397-04:00I can fell the chill go right through me...bkmI can fell the chill go right through me...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-4829042887054949992010-09-24T15:44:39.701-04:002010-09-24T15:44:39.701-04:00You have captured the feeling of autumn beautifull...You have captured the feeling of autumn beautifully.Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-32766801845271634582010-09-24T13:19:22.643-04:002010-09-24T13:19:22.643-04:00Brrrr, I can feel the chill in the air in your poe...Brrrr, I can feel the chill in the air in your poem as the lake sprays ice. Hopefully it will be a while before one leaf remains, but who knows. Nice work.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com