tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post4787748178130534751..comments2024-03-28T21:54:07.709-04:00Comments on Humbucker Poems: A Poem Turns 10Brother Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-22964566648312184442011-01-25T05:22:27.428-05:002011-01-25T05:22:27.428-05:00Good word choices, like the short lines/flow. Exc...Good word choices, like the short lines/flow. Excellent, overall.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-63161578007927653752011-01-12T22:35:42.145-05:002011-01-12T22:35:42.145-05:00Love the use of contrast, concealing deep thoughts...Love the use of contrast, concealing deep thoughts in simple phrases. Great write.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-39973809848280079242011-01-12T17:33:13.672-05:002011-01-12T17:33:13.672-05:00"a sweet meditation" sounds like a much ..."a sweet meditation" sounds like a much needed pause in the day. Well done. Cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-43660503861746937062011-01-12T17:23:21.921-05:002011-01-12T17:23:21.921-05:00"haul" is an interesting contrast with &..."haul" is an interesting contrast with "meditation" and "forgotten" with "clarity." BeautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com