tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post5611083769862312928..comments2024-03-28T21:54:07.709-04:00Comments on Humbucker Poems: heartsBrother Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-72277546007360369422013-05-10T10:24:07.890-04:002013-05-10T10:24:07.890-04:00I learned so much from these few lines. You do kno...I learned so much from these few lines. You do know how to write, Ollie. I admire and appreciate that. Bravo!<br /><br />http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/05/10/wounded/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-34513654942584050582013-05-09T13:37:08.575-04:002013-05-09T13:37:08.575-04:00Very powerful. Nicely written.Very powerful. Nicely written.paperdollmomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14315900640385889481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-17143081309276864922013-05-09T08:57:44.745-04:002013-05-09T08:57:44.745-04:00So much said with just a few words...beautifully w...So much said with just a few words...beautifully written.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-33130437173754290132013-05-09T06:37:09.340-04:002013-05-09T06:37:09.340-04:00seeing a baby on all the heart monitors and tubes....seeing a baby on all the heart monitors and tubes....heart breaking....the generational blood washed theme def made me thing of hereditary disease...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-2694742391906809292013-05-09T05:30:33.335-04:002013-05-09T05:30:33.335-04:00Love! You have a very cool style and you packed in...Love! You have a very cool style and you packed in a ton of emotions its a concise but beautifully composed poemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-58548659343544116202013-05-09T05:25:24.842-04:002013-05-09T05:25:24.842-04:00A multi-layered poem. Life comes in full circleA multi-layered poem. Life comes in full circleTCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-61027338843375012692013-05-09T04:27:03.313-04:002013-05-09T04:27:03.313-04:00So wonderful and short........ Nice one
So wonderful and short........ Nice one<br />Aishwarya Mageshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13389941948853317331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-30749475171738365342013-05-09T00:18:04.143-04:002013-05-09T00:18:04.143-04:00A beginning of life marks the first point on the c...A beginning of life marks the first point on the circle of life. Each living thing has its own life cycle. ...hope the sputtering heart heals soon.<br />Very powerful lines...:)Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-9381409004946613432013-05-08T21:16:20.369-04:002013-05-08T21:16:20.369-04:00So true that cycles so often repeat from one gener...So true that cycles so often repeat from one generation to another. Genetics...or not.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-53911294404758194512013-05-08T18:23:55.114-04:002013-05-08T18:23:55.114-04:00For some reason this suggested heart disease passe...For some reason this suggested heart disease passed from one generation to another. One hopes the tubes and scars will help the sputtering hearts beat strongly!<a href="http://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/05/08/on-the-border/" rel="nofollow">On The Border</a>WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-83259295515097333182013-05-08T18:09:28.681-04:002013-05-08T18:09:28.681-04:00 fragile hearts needing much strength - old and yo... fragile hearts needing much strength - old and young! Keep those sputtering hearts strong!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-86407211087875804002013-05-08T18:02:50.339-04:002013-05-08T18:02:50.339-04:00Brother Ollie,
The cycle of life and the desire t...Brother Ollie,<br /><br />The cycle of life and the desire to exist, and to prolong that existence. Physical imapirments which weight heavily upon all ages and all along; the right to live, treated with respect.<br /><br />Very powerful words...<br /><br />Eileen<br /><br />Eileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-88523883727699364452013-05-08T17:35:16.079-04:002013-05-08T17:35:16.079-04:00Really like the sputtering hearts and all that it ...Really like the sputtering hearts and all that it suggests,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-83052302070027275972013-05-08T16:41:45.847-04:002013-05-08T16:41:45.847-04:00Again, I love this one. Thanks for posting it - cl...Again, I love this one. Thanks for posting it - clear message from start to finish and strong visuals.parentforward.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02363442700397713616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-88156946108683639412013-05-08T15:48:39.012-04:002013-05-08T15:48:39.012-04:00oh these sputtering hearts indeed! Keep on sputter...oh these sputtering hearts indeed! Keep on sputtering and hold that last breath dear!Scott Matthewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16409959261704669866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-80775348763868512102013-05-08T08:29:59.006-04:002013-05-08T08:29:59.006-04:00An honest, touching write, so well done.An honest, touching write, so well done.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-27400196058330433832013-05-08T08:02:58.521-04:002013-05-08T08:02:58.521-04:00your words are so visual and raw, nicely doneyour words are so visual and raw, nicely doneaka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-29509466032220629222013-05-08T07:30:24.066-04:002013-05-08T07:30:24.066-04:00and the cycle goes on, perhaps people's mindse...and the cycle goes on, perhaps people's mindset can change it...Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-56125826496727194402013-05-07T15:30:14.867-04:002013-05-07T15:30:14.867-04:00aawwwwwww. ouch, sputtering. all those tubes and w...aawwwwwww. ouch, sputtering. all those tubes and wires.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-5028177137433853432013-05-07T12:58:08.482-04:002013-05-07T12:58:08.482-04:00As always, Ollie, you move your reader with your o...As always, Ollie, you move your reader with your observation. I love "oh these sputtering hearts".......and I hope YOUR heart beats steady and strong. For we need you!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-12673427109931920402013-05-07T11:05:03.447-04:002013-05-07T11:05:03.447-04:00This can be taken in so many ways. An outspoken st...This can be taken in so many ways. An outspoken statement against end-of-life at both ends, or a personal account and reflection? Either way, it is powerful.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-26692143860206315492013-05-07T08:47:57.705-04:002013-05-07T08:47:57.705-04:00/ a generational blood-washed theme
from babies
to.../ a generational blood-washed theme<br />from babies<br />to lingering grandfathers/<br /><br />Nice line, it is powerful and says so much, like a lyric to a song, perhaps.parentforward.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02363442700397713616noreply@blogger.com