tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post6425405589514649239..comments2024-03-29T07:13:29.065-04:00Comments on Humbucker Poems: b string lament Brother Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-53132020903626557222015-08-05T00:21:25.220-04:002015-08-05T00:21:25.220-04:00I like your style.I like your style.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-56471058529739893462015-06-03T09:02:48.616-04:002015-06-03T09:02:48.616-04:00Oh, that's lovely!Oh, that's lovely!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-46723925306808528922015-06-02T21:47:02.715-04:002015-06-02T21:47:02.715-04:00Butterfly vibrato is a brilliant description of a ...Butterfly vibrato is a brilliant description of a wobbly vibrato. Sad poem about missing someone. Another light snuffed out !rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-63656494027119679912015-06-01T19:54:07.730-04:002015-06-01T19:54:07.730-04:00All the technical moves can not fill the emptiness...All the technical moves can not fill the emptiness of the missing point. A new way to make this point, with the play on a song title--and maybe a missing love as well.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-33680391710991033002015-06-01T18:09:26.048-04:002015-06-01T18:09:26.048-04:00But one must continue to tune, tighten, release, a...But one must continue to tune, tighten, release, adapt in order to live, No?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-31180788164790965732015-06-01T16:13:33.933-04:002015-06-01T16:13:33.933-04:00My D sting is tuned perfecting when I hear the gea...My D sting is tuned perfecting when I hear the gear snap "erck"... I enjoyed this piece smiling.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-92120129594257112132015-06-01T14:44:11.136-04:002015-06-01T14:44:11.136-04:00Someone to sing to is important. Someone to sing to is important. Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-70316110568825991292015-06-01T06:38:23.896-04:002015-06-01T06:38:23.896-04:00A song without a special 'you' is the sadd...A song without a special 'you' is the saddest lament.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-42038832741385294382015-06-01T02:10:15.464-04:002015-06-01T02:10:15.464-04:00was it lyric-less of no melody at all. poignant pi...was it lyric-less of no melody at all. poignant piece of poetrytotomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-16368237278879274922015-06-01T01:45:10.481-04:002015-06-01T01:45:10.481-04:00I am not so sure. I think that longing is a great ...I am not so sure. I think that longing is a great stimulus to our writing bringing out that never ending desire to love and be loved.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-24705044456531180502015-05-31T16:28:56.548-04:002015-05-31T16:28:56.548-04:00I love how the poem sings on my tongue and then si...I love how the poem sings on my tongue and then sits sadly empty...wonderfully written.<br /><br />Donna@LivingFromHappinessDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13420133886162844400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-79812539073641705452015-05-31T16:28:37.658-04:002015-05-31T16:28:37.658-04:00Very moving....those last two lines...wow!Very moving....those last two lines...wow!C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-89056155841847512832015-05-31T14:57:20.177-04:002015-05-31T14:57:20.177-04:00"singing but the song is empty without you......"singing but the song is empty without you........" Poignant, Ollie. Beautifully done.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-54533774998513819552015-05-31T14:11:26.533-04:002015-05-31T14:11:26.533-04:00Brother Ollie,
It is hard to give life and faith ...Brother Ollie,<br /><br />It is hard to give life and faith to words, if there is an emptiness at heart. The notes and the chords, seems to sense the discord involved..<br />Happier days as summer arrives,<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-86915702964957371462015-05-31T13:19:04.464-04:002015-05-31T13:19:04.464-04:00the last three lines say it all...a song without i...the last three lines say it all...a song without its soul...beautifully penned...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-72053735686825960482015-05-31T10:43:42.275-04:002015-05-31T10:43:42.275-04:00A beautiful & emotive piece :)A beautiful & emotive piece :)Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-710535423002886252015-05-31T10:24:48.052-04:002015-05-31T10:24:48.052-04:00be careful with that vibrato, don't wanna brea...be careful with that vibrato, don't wanna break that string.<br />And even if you do , remember you can always get a new set of strings( i like slinkys myself ) that sound fresherSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-79670983879328896432015-05-31T08:17:04.048-04:002015-05-31T08:17:04.048-04:00Without the inspiration, what is a song but words ...Without the inspiration, what is a song but words and notes? Nice emotional pull in this Ollie.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-80844056880385144042015-05-31T07:53:11.712-04:002015-05-31T07:53:11.712-04:00Butterfly vibratos.. this sounds so exciting.. but...Butterfly vibratos.. this sounds so exciting.. but you need that special other to make it complete.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-59143135505891859352015-05-31T07:52:43.666-04:002015-05-31T07:52:43.666-04:00Sad if the one the song is sung for is gone. A so...Sad if the one the song is sung for is gone. A song such as this needs a recipient who is present.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-88633208610715781422015-05-31T07:27:50.962-04:002015-05-31T07:27:50.962-04:00Maybe that's why the guitar is broken..a song ...Maybe that's why the guitar is broken..a song needs a 'you' to be played toJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-11424385725271510932015-05-31T07:23:30.629-04:002015-05-31T07:23:30.629-04:00the last lines reveal the truth, without emotions ...the last lines reveal the truth, without emotions nothing mattersVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com