tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post7536635424368415379..comments2024-03-22T13:46:07.401-04:00Comments on Humbucker Poems: a stuck poemBrother Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-39924217448587304862013-07-02T02:57:15.495-04:002013-07-02T02:57:15.495-04:00Brilliant imagery. Loved this.Brilliant imagery. Loved this.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-28555435588827902642013-06-25T11:45:03.523-04:002013-06-25T11:45:03.523-04:00It has a way of righting itself. It'll find it...It has a way of righting itself. It'll find its way out eventually! Nicely Brother Ollie!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-40983817574670172062013-06-23T20:00:38.513-04:002013-06-23T20:00:38.513-04:00I hate when the pick gets stuck in there and no ma...I hate when the pick gets stuck in there and no matter how much shaking you do, it won't come out. Keep a few spares for moments like these I guess??aka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-59335386738660706472013-06-23T20:00:08.464-04:002013-06-23T20:00:08.464-04:00I love this. It is such a tangible piece!I love this. It is such a tangible piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-41417872015785500002013-06-23T15:54:00.034-04:002013-06-23T15:54:00.034-04:00Oh I know the feeling--let it stay and plink along...Oh I know the feeling--let it stay and plink along for a while--it'll make its way out--smiles to you!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-37489333513368662542013-06-23T14:36:24.912-04:002013-06-23T14:36:24.912-04:00But what a place to be stuck.But what a place to be stuck.aelfbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-75181729865706750872013-06-23T14:21:19.134-04:002013-06-23T14:21:19.134-04:00we feel thus stuck at times.but the good this is, ...we feel thus stuck at times.but the good this is, that the phase passes.and the first creation that comes after this unwanted break, brings sheer relief.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-41601074851989911372013-06-23T13:49:20.100-04:002013-06-23T13:49:20.100-04:00short, sweet and relate-able short, sweet and relate-able Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-64912676185611261152013-06-23T13:36:38.776-04:002013-06-23T13:36:38.776-04:00this happens to me with words all the time... I of...this happens to me with words all the time... I often blame it on MS, but you know, sometimes thoughts, poems, words, just slip and go plink because that is where they are going.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-80214506725962341912013-06-23T13:07:19.450-04:002013-06-23T13:07:19.450-04:00Some poems are like that! Then they show up unexpe...Some poems are like that! Then they show up unexpectedly --I've even found a few stuck in the washing machine! Great poem!<a href="http://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/06/23/wherein-the-muses-vehicle-goes-into-the-shop-for-repairs/" rel="nofollow">Wherein The Muse's Vehicle Goes Into the Shop for Repairs</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-55677278124086124542013-06-23T12:48:39.010-04:002013-06-23T12:48:39.010-04:00It isn't always often or easily done, that ver...It isn't always often or easily done, that very few words can convey so much. You have acheived that here. I can see and hear your poem.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-63662425532735273062013-06-23T10:33:37.314-04:002013-06-23T10:33:37.314-04:00was nice to appreciate the music of your words aga...was nice to appreciate the music of your words again...smiles. happy sundayBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-58304893712056376932013-06-23T09:05:57.163-04:002013-06-23T09:05:57.163-04:00I have known some of those bouncing and skittering...I have known some of those bouncing and skittering poems as well. Smiles.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-63287966232624842062013-06-23T08:56:11.601-04:002013-06-23T08:56:11.601-04:00I relate to this - wonderfully expressed!I relate to this - wonderfully expressed!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-57736913591541915982013-05-30T08:31:38.427-04:002013-05-30T08:31:38.427-04:00ha. i know that sounds...and hey as long as its st...ha. i know that sounds...and hey as long as its still making music and not stuck dead and lifeless you are fine...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-78413026787881617432013-05-27T17:17:18.572-04:002013-05-27T17:17:18.572-04:00Shake it, maybe, like a maraca!Shake it, maybe, like a maraca!Richard Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09836071864882271852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-81639286186280184082013-05-27T14:09:16.609-04:002013-05-27T14:09:16.609-04:00I have a few stuck poems - I think they're rat...I have a few stuck poems - I think they're rattling around in a saucepan under the cupboard.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-71865583917064261182013-05-27T12:42:50.890-04:002013-05-27T12:42:50.890-04:00This is perfect. I love it! Rattling like a lost p...This is perfect. I love it! Rattling like a lost pick - good one! My sister is just back from Newfoundland where she says all men have sheds where they go to drink and play guitar. Does the Tired Monk have a shed, Ollie?Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com