tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post1561751855159028642..comments2024-03-22T13:46:07.401-04:00Comments on Humbucker Poems: the Tired Monk's City - NightBrother Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-10239846884802480812011-12-16T17:53:10.144-05:002011-12-16T17:53:10.144-05:00this made me want to walk those same dark, cold st...this made me want to walk those same dark, cold streets...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-40041073569234680942011-12-13T09:33:25.090-05:002011-12-13T09:33:25.090-05:00that "black snow" only appears when the ...that "black snow" only appears when the lights are behind it... it's a specific image that always surprises me.Bethany Annhttp://bethanyanndavidson.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-3701679276403272342011-12-10T05:22:24.982-05:002011-12-10T05:22:24.982-05:00You draw the tired monk clearly, and then the whol...You draw the tired monk clearly, and then the whole scene is lit by that last line.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-85694829250108750192011-12-09T23:55:00.653-05:002011-12-09T23:55:00.653-05:00another treat, but b-r-r-r-r!another treat, but b-r-r-r-r!Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-57613760197042851442011-12-09T19:12:53.897-05:002011-12-09T19:12:53.897-05:00I don't want to walk in those cold city nights...I don't want to walk in those cold city nights...<br /><br />Nice one ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-84918263037006008062011-12-09T19:07:48.137-05:002011-12-09T19:07:48.137-05:00Another beautiful, evocative image.Another beautiful, evocative image.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-38776962055391105222011-12-09T16:42:50.055-05:002011-12-09T16:42:50.055-05:00Well written! Reminds me of winter.
Erick FloresWell written! Reminds me of winter.<br /><br />Erick FloresAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06838425722247850036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-30046612810364595212011-12-09T13:06:15.881-05:002011-12-09T13:06:15.881-05:00So beautiful - makes me want to go for a walk at n...So beautiful - makes me want to go for a walk at night! In the country the stars are glorious.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-33583523693474819082011-12-09T11:24:42.033-05:002011-12-09T11:24:42.033-05:00I really like the sound of these lines:
'the T...I really like the sound of these lines:<br />'the Tired Monk<br />slips through drifts<br />walking stick steadies'Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-51513034158275291172011-12-09T05:04:31.523-05:002011-12-09T05:04:31.523-05:00Old Ollie,
Your image of the city has an auterity...Old Ollie,<br /><br />Your image of the city has an auterity about it. Simply the impersonal feel, even with city snow...<br />Tired Monk lives in a better place. The city is far enough away to allow him the peace he requires..<br />( Rather like myself living in Macclesfield, as opposed to the city of Manchester. Thanks for your comment Ollie!!)<br /><br />Best Wishes, EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-15322161796752193882011-12-09T02:30:45.745-05:002011-12-09T02:30:45.745-05:00Good stuff, per always.Good stuff, per always.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-32060228017795953542011-12-09T02:27:45.764-05:002011-12-09T02:27:45.764-05:00:):)Matthew John Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09692136501131270216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-81759336687998476982011-12-08T22:48:49.803-05:002011-12-08T22:48:49.803-05:00You have captured a lovely image within the cleari...You have captured a lovely image within the clearing (love that).Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com