tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post4505788410404597468..comments2024-03-28T21:54:07.709-04:00Comments on Humbucker Poems: a school window daydreamBrother Olliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-18912948878851351252011-09-13T07:50:55.710-04:002011-09-13T07:50:55.710-04:00Love this piece :) Really reminds me to daydream m...Love this piece :) Really reminds me to daydream more :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-82031808680818031122011-09-11T02:28:02.794-04:002011-09-11T02:28:02.794-04:00What a beautiful flashback!What a beautiful flashback!madhumakhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09624377766663002237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-12882171571228777452011-09-11T02:12:25.382-04:002011-09-11T02:12:25.382-04:00lessons lost
in deep daydreams...
what a thoughfu...lessons lost<br />in deep daydreams...<br /><br />what a thoughful words... love it!:)Nenihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05663250239152621476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-36613426182428658182011-09-09T17:32:52.429-04:002011-09-09T17:32:52.429-04:00sigh...:)sigh...:)Bethany Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01767559135432032568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-21597082840156229842011-09-09T15:47:07.020-04:002011-09-09T15:47:07.020-04:00I love this one
"windows bathed
in post rain...I love this one<br /> "windows bathed<br />in post rain sun<br />lessons lost<br />in deep daydreams..."<br />so beautiful!!!<br /><br />Brilliant! :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-77289968598617925322011-09-09T14:37:26.747-04:002011-09-09T14:37:26.747-04:00This has a nice skip to it.This has a nice skip to it.Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-10201729572562120922011-09-09T13:22:12.972-04:002011-09-09T13:22:12.972-04:00Nice to read another Daydreamer :)Nice to read another Daydreamer :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-91526781275389648022011-09-09T13:08:04.365-04:002011-09-09T13:08:04.365-04:00I so love your slices of life snippets. Can feel t...I so love your slices of life snippets. Can feel the joy.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-74726784663129553792011-09-09T08:44:28.059-04:002011-09-09T08:44:28.059-04:00Ohh yeah, know that feeling.Ohh yeah, know that feeling.Strausshttp://forfainthearted.blogspot.com/2011/07/bruised.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-90050974075644229202011-09-09T01:55:26.138-04:002011-09-09T01:55:26.138-04:00I always hated it when someone woke me from my day...I always hated it when someone woke me from my daydreams. Great memories though.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-28615730151174009402011-09-09T00:18:46.589-04:002011-09-09T00:18:46.589-04:00Happiness. Giddy hsppiness. Haven't seen that ...Happiness. Giddy hsppiness. Haven't seen that in quite a while.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-19878564539996102292011-09-08T23:53:41.695-04:002011-09-08T23:53:41.695-04:00Oh, I could see it all--well done! This was fun.
...Oh, I could see it all--well done! This was fun.<br /><br />GayleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-50583331047977401582011-09-08T22:26:20.913-04:002011-09-08T22:26:20.913-04:00The second stanza reads much faster that the first...The second stanza reads much faster that the first... I can feel the excitement. Well done.<br /><br />~laurieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-65155801037962322592011-09-08T22:01:22.175-04:002011-09-08T22:01:22.175-04:00I was back in grade three. Yippee! Thanks for the ...I was back in grade three. Yippee! Thanks for the transportation.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-42150553973741999992011-09-08T21:04:47.425-04:002011-09-08T21:04:47.425-04:00Fifty years disappeared in a decade of lines, than...Fifty years disappeared in a decade of lines, thank you for that...Raining Iguanashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15461327421951949725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-69513940887032317152011-09-08T19:35:35.266-04:002011-09-08T19:35:35.266-04:00Wonderful poem, loved how it took me back to wishi...Wonderful poem, loved how it took me back to wishing the class away looking out the windows.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-91634573633696901552011-09-08T18:23:31.319-04:002011-09-08T18:23:31.319-04:00I like this very much, it bought back memories (th...I like this very much, it bought back memories (though I never had a bike) :-(Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-53384111012311933602011-09-08T16:42:06.987-04:002011-09-08T16:42:06.987-04:00We have all been through the same daydream so many...We have all been through the same daydream so many times...even the time of daydreams is now lost. Good one!Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-85969472658464257832011-09-08T16:32:33.121-04:002011-09-08T16:32:33.121-04:00I did that a lot of times too....this is fun ~I did that a lot of times too....this is fun ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-71487527548146111322011-09-08T13:05:42.955-04:002011-09-08T13:05:42.955-04:00Daydreaming was the best part of school. Hell, in ...Daydreaming was the best part of school. Hell, in all those years in a desk I must have traveled the globe ten thousand times over (it's nothing like they tell you).<br /><br />Great write.Andreashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05129547380377962436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6657515350922188738.post-10998408312516640752011-09-08T12:19:39.726-04:002011-09-08T12:19:39.726-04:00Old Ollie,
I could see the picture very clearly t...Old Ollie,<br /><br />I could see the picture very clearly through your words. Just wonderful!!<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.com