Monday, May 25, 2009

Broken Windshield

Pillars Cracking
straining under ancient impacts
scattered dust and rust flakes
snap
the cool winds pull
down a white washed slab.
through a windshield
of a Mercedes.
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4 comments:

  1. Sarath UnnithanMarch 7, 2011 at 7:11 AM

    aah...love the allegory!

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  2. BubbaMarch 7, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    Most likely it won't improve their vision.

    Nice one, Double-O!

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  3. UnknownMarch 7, 2011 at 5:40 PM

    I thought of the face of a woman too long in the cold, too often neglected.

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  4. JingleMarch 10, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    agree with Kim..

    powerful imagery.

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Thanks for helping with the development of Olsonomics.

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