Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Winter 1.0

cold in the forest this morning
wind whips up the back of my coat
snowflakes vanish
into the black of my coffee
dog runs back inside
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 13, 2009 at 5:30 PM

    fuckin' great one.

    HP

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  2. ScottlBJanuary 16, 2011 at 8:20 PM

    greetings to a new winter day...poor puppy lol

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    Good write and smart dog.

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  4. madhumakhiJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:39 AM

    Brrrrrrrrrrr! Imagine having coffee with snowflakes. i'm so lucky to be living in a country that's not very cold during the winters, atleast not so cold that dogs have to "run back" inside.
    I like your poem. Nice and brief.

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  5. flaubertJanuary 17, 2011 at 5:59 PM

    Nice write Ollie and I see the dog was smart:)
    Pamela

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  6. AndreasJanuary 18, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    "snowflakes vanish
    into the black of my coffee" -
    love that image.

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