Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Winter 1.0

cold in the forest this morning
wind whips up the back of my coat
snowflakes vanish
into the black of my coffee
dog runs back inside

6 comments:

  1. fuckin' great one.

    HP

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  2. greetings to a new winter day...poor puppy lol

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  3. Brrrrrrrrrrr! Imagine having coffee with snowflakes. i'm so lucky to be living in a country that's not very cold during the winters, atleast not so cold that dogs have to "run back" inside.
    I like your poem. Nice and brief.

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  4. Nice write Ollie and I see the dog was smart:)
    Pamela

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  5. "snowflakes vanish
    into the black of my coffee" -
    love that image.

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