Monday, July 25, 2011

a tired monk morning

been down to the forest
pre-dawn deep in shadows
a place of slow coffee sips

inside

little rustles...creaks
novices awake

6 comments:

  1. you and robert

    i'm afraid i slept

    he comes back with photographs of the fog. you come back with pockets of peace.

    xo
    erin

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  2. I love this. Is there any coffee left?

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  3. "a place of slow coffee sips"
    Love this.
    A wonderful arrangment of words :)

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  4. our "rustles... creaks" are more like "thwacks... shrieks". comes from having 'em so close together.

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  5. Really like the image of the early morning forest this evokes, with the lone monk in lonely contemplation of his surroundings. You do such a wonderful job of eliciting response from your readers in such brief verse. A wonderful gift.

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  6. You never waste words, and I find that refreshing :)

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