Tuesday, September 18, 2012

song of glory

the guitar top
chipped worn
cracked

pick mark laced
rusting strings
nagging fret buzz

the tired monk
adds a few more nicks
working on the song of glory

15 comments:

  1. A battered and seasoned old guitar that has Really Lived always sounds better, as does the musician who plays it:)

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  2. I'm becoming really hooked on this tired monk. I think he's a great guy!

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  3. Old guitars can still make great music!

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  4. pick mark laced
    rusting strings
    nagging fret buzz

    Very typical of an old guitar with pick marks,rusting strings and the fret space worn out! Thanks for the memories,Old Ollie! Nicely!

    Hank

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  5. You can work it!
    I loved your imagery, it guided me to
    stopping fretting and replace those strings ;D
    Your imagery was beautiful~

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  6. The song of glory.... lovely image for a tired monk :)

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  7. Very cool poem! "nagging fret buzz"... nice! :)

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  8. Keep styling, homie. Dedication brings glory.

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  9. Chipped, worn, cracked – the stuff of masterpieces.

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  10. Genial!

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  11. Out of the rustic comes a shot at glory.

    Great, Ollie.

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