Friday, September 26, 2014

rig prayers

click wheel spins
rolling through
three thousand songs

bass rolls out
over the rush hour cars
stuck
  just music
       and time
for traffic jam prayers

9 comments:

  1. I love the entire idea of "traffic jam prayers" - good time to let the mind rest peacefully, while other drivers are frustrated and impatient........

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  2. That surely is a productive use of a traffic jam!

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  3. Traffic jam prayers--- great idea. Though what moves me to prayer while driving is the Mackinac Bridge, which is scary.

    Great poem in a small package.

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  4. 'traffic jam prayers' i love that idea! i'll never think of daytime radio the same again!

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/

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  5. hey maybe you just needed to slow down to really hear the music
    and this is just another divine moment crafted for you...

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  6. as crisp and lovely as always.kudos brother.

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  7. What better place to pray than in a rig. :-)

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  8. Very good job capturing the feel of what you hear though the doors.

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