Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Moon Robes

forest is lit
for this late night walk
fireflies, dim stars
bright moon
matches my robes
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13 comments:

  1. The Square CornerJuly 27, 2010 at 11:42 PM

    Atmosphere. Pitch perfect poem.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 2, 2010 at 10:48 PM

    a mystic tinge, a realist touch.
    Good one.

    hp

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  3. bttrflyscarJuly 21, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    Ooh! I felt this one. cheers.

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  4. SusannahJuly 21, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    Beautiful, I love it. :-)

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  5. SusannahJuly 21, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    Beautiful, I love it. :-)

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  6. flaubertJuly 21, 2011 at 3:50 PM

    Nice Ollie, haven't been around to read your writing lately. Beautiful as ever.

    Pamela

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  7. UnknownJuly 21, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    And tonight, I shall walk my forest, inspired by your poem.

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  8. ElizabethJuly 22, 2011 at 1:39 AM

    Meditative and vivid with details, unseen. Brings back memories,

    Elizabeth

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  9. JinksyJuly 22, 2011 at 8:27 AM

    Filled with night's calm...

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  10. Kerry O'ConnorJuly 22, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    Oh, just lovely. The last line makes it.

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyJuly 22, 2011 at 1:09 PM

    Beautiful. I can see the robes in the moonlight.

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  12. hedgewitchJuly 22, 2011 at 4:12 PM

    Something new under the moon, something old as well--and I don't mean the monk.

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  13. EllaJuly 23, 2011 at 12:01 AM

    Old Monk glows; I love the calm beauty of your words~

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