Poems by Brother Ollie: the Tired Monk
Brrrr, I can feel the chill in the air in your poem as the lake sprays ice. Hopefully it will be a while before one leaf remains, but who knows. Nice work.
You have captured the feeling of autumn beautifully.
I can fell the chill go right through me...bkm
Your vivid imagery has put us all there...beautiful poem! :-)
So well done........crisp, clear and cold.......
loved the sequence.. great haiku
cute piece...beautiful Haikus.
ah, beautiful - I can feel the cold, the icy spray, the warmth of the fire...
I can feel the chill and crave the warmth, I love the line "branches rise their burden released one leaf remains" so life like~ Beautiful~
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Brrrr, I can feel the chill in the air in your poem as the lake sprays ice. Hopefully it will be a while before one leaf remains, but who knows. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the feeling of autumn beautifully.
ReplyDeleteI can fell the chill go right through me...bkm
ReplyDeleteYour vivid imagery has put us all there...beautiful poem! :-)
ReplyDeleteSo well done........crisp, clear and cold.......
ReplyDeleteloved the sequence.. great haiku
ReplyDeletecute piece...
ReplyDeletebeautiful Haikus.
ah, beautiful - I can feel the cold, the icy spray, the warmth of the fire...
ReplyDeleteI can feel the chill and crave the warmth, I love the line "branches rise their burden released one leaf remains" so life like~ Beautiful~
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