Poems by Brother Ollie: the Tired Monk
Brrrr, I can feel the chill in the air in your poem as the lake sprays ice. Hopefully it will be a while before one leaf remains, but who knows. Nice work.
You have captured the feeling of autumn beautifully.
I can fell the chill go right through me...bkm
Your vivid imagery has put us all there...beautiful poem! :-)
So well done........crisp, clear and cold.......
loved the sequence.. great haiku
cute piece...beautiful Haikus.
ah, beautiful - I can feel the cold, the icy spray, the warmth of the fire...
I can feel the chill and crave the warmth, I love the line "branches rise their burden released one leaf remains" so life like~ Beautiful~
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