Thursday, December 9, 2010

forgive me

black eyes
swung from ragged fists
insincerity, and broken hearts
comments loosely tossed -
steeped deep in sarcasm
slow to act moments
stand by failures

forgive me

6 comments:

  1. Beautiful. The last two words say it all. It reaches the heart!

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  2. There's a lot that can be interpreted from this. It's concise and sharp and gives me little chills.

    Really, really good.

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  3. u r forgiven
    after this is written.
    well done.

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  4. I love how you enveloped so much, in so few words!
    Brilliant!

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  5. I'll hold my words, not because of sarcasm but my delight. Burst of emotions can do lots of damage most of the time.

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  6. Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!

    End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

    Your support has been a delight to us, at this time of the year, We wish you all the best !

    Link up a poem to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!

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