Tuesday, May 3, 2011

work door



this work door
this daily portal
think paint, rusty, splattered,

heavy
as any temple door

19 comments:

  1. and somedays work is as much devotion as any temple...

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  2. Just how Brian said. Good short piece.

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  3. ah. and a space so intimate and worn, at times.

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  4. amazing emotion and imagery which rises up before me reading your words which are straight forward, achingly expressed...i can feel the drudgery and yet the devotion...great write...

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  5. such a lot of emotion expressed so succinctly thank you

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  6. i'll be thinking about this one for awhile...

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  7. Nice. I can feel the heaviness of daily drudgery behind these words.

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  8. All work is honorable I was once told, and perhaps in its purest form devotional as well. I'm always amazed at how much you can say with a perfect sparsity of words.

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  9. short and powerful...much emotion packed into these few words and image.

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  10. Every space can be a temple. Every space can be defiled. We choose.

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  11. Oh so cool to make that connection!

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  12. Perfectly packed with power! Very much enjoyed.

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  13. And an interesting photo to consolidate it...

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  14. Nice temple....my Beloved Pens have lost....but I am glad that Sid the Kid has a nice break to get ready for next year.....bkm

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  15. I dig concentrated poetry like this. Less is more, and this is definitely more. Excellent! :D

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  16. so much said in so little words!

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  17. Nice. Alot of monks don't realize that the temple is where the shit goes down.

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