Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Redemption 3

pulsing wood stove heat
swirls around exposed rafters
door swings
quick dash for another round
of snow chilled beers

smoke and songs
flow out
high

over the neighbourhood

10 comments:

  1. Ollie! Nice to see you, kiddo. I love this. I can picture it all. I have heard that in the Maritimes every man has his "shed".......a man cave away from the wimmin. LOL. Cool idea. But I'd want my own shed, too.

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  2. Beer and wood smoke make for great poetry.
    Ha. As does seeing all the little details
    of life.

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  3. Such a wonderful take on the prompt :D
    Loved it!

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  4. smoke and songs
    flow out
    high

    over the neighbourhood..........that just grabbed me by the collar and made me say - Oh,Yeah

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  5. Hmmm. An interesting setting to take out a tablet or a pen ...

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  6. Hmmm, usually I understand how your poems fit a prompt; but this time I don't get how it fits the Midweek Motif prompt. I must be missing something. Explain?

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  7. a good ambiance for the word-flow :)

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  8. Can picture a swarthy kind of guy rushing in while smoke swirls above! Chilled beer that's what he is after! Great take Bro Ollie!

    Hank

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  9. I bet there's lots of poetry in smoke and songs. May the whole neighborhood hear, .

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  10. Sounds like a winter I know well.

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