Poems by Brother Ollie: the Tired Monk
"haul" is an interesting contrast with "meditation" and "forgotten" with "clarity." Beautiful
"a sweet meditation" sounds like a much needed pause in the day. Well done. Cheers
Love the use of contrast, concealing deep thoughts in simple phrases. Great write.
Good word choices, like the short lines/flow. Excellent, overall.
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