Wednesday, April 15, 2009

A Poem Turns 10

smokin' in some lost
alcove
a simply still moment
each haul
a sweet meditation
a quiet breath
all the reasons forgotten
in the light clarity
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 12, 2011 at 5:23 PM

    "haul" is an interesting contrast with "meditation" and "forgotten" with "clarity." Beautiful

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  2. dustusJanuary 12, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    "a sweet meditation" sounds like a much needed pause in the day. Well done. Cheers

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  3. ReflectionsJanuary 12, 2011 at 10:35 PM

    Love the use of contrast, concealing deep thoughts in simple phrases. Great write.

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  4. Steve IsaakJanuary 25, 2011 at 5:22 AM

    Good word choices, like the short lines/flow. Excellent, overall.

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