Friday, October 8, 2010

Fall 3.0

sandals sweep
through breezy leaves
of the forest floor
sun undims the world
colours creep
reveals the redness
of my robes
i sink
into the leaves
a perfect blend
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8 comments:

  1. Square CornerOctober 9, 2010 at 12:16 AM

    Great autumn post.

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 14, 2010 at 5:19 PM

    I love it! Love "sun undims the world", and the image of your sandals and robes sinking into the leaves...........very colorful. Perfection.

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  3. SusannahOctober 15, 2010 at 4:12 AM

    I like this very much.

    ... 'colours creep, reveals the redness of my robes' I love the imagery. :-)

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  4. Carrie Van HornOctober 15, 2010 at 9:45 AM

    The forest floor love that....this is wonderous...i love it! :-)

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  5. Amanda MooreOctober 15, 2010 at 10:43 PM

    gosh if I could only go to this place.... "sun undims the world"... fabulous use of written imagery!

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  6. EllaOctober 16, 2010 at 6:48 PM

    I love this; really can visualize fall's beauty~

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  7. Eileen T O'Neill .....October 17, 2010 at 12:38 PM

    old ollie,
    A beautiful autumnal feel to your colourful words.

    Lovely image..
    Best wishes, Eileen

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  8. WysteriaOctober 21, 2010 at 9:03 AM

    Oh yes, by reading this poem - I know autumn is here for sure. Lovely


    Wysteria

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