Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Frost


frost treaded deep
sun slips over fields
sinking into the dark

4 comments:

  1. Wow, the first frost! Spooky:) Worded to perfection!

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  2. I feel the frost and more.
    cute piece.

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    Happy Halloween to you. Our Halloween potluck is open,
    Post a poem on Halloween, or share an old poem unrelated to the theme, link in. that’s how you get the best result of feedback.
    Feel free to take any awards from this post, enjoy!
    xxx

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