Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Bench Seat (the Poem)

it is dream:
old truck one owner
vintage and pure
big ol' metal
and rustic grit

slip up into that bench seat
play songs
with narrative -
stories

she likes that

slides over, slow
driver side

as her song plays
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4 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 3, 2010 at 11:16 AM

    Wonderful! The truck, the mood, the writing. A zinger of perfection.

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  2. Square CornerNovember 3, 2010 at 9:00 PM

    These two go together, the poem and the story. Clever.

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  3. Human ParadoxNovember 3, 2010 at 11:23 PM

    Great feel OO. Keep 'em coming.

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  4. Juice BoxNovember 4, 2010 at 12:07 AM

    Lovely. Really lovely. It creates a nice image in my head.

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