Thursday, November 11, 2010

Family 1.0

historically broken
scattered unspoken

rebuild the bitter
to blessed

8 comments:

  1. Oh yes, so profoundly true. Age helps in the healing of memories.

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  2. Thank god life's road provides rest spots and turnarounds where "historically broken" families have a chance to meet again, rethink differences...

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  3. This poem describes my family utterly and perfectly. I connect very deeply with this.

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  4. You and I are definitely on the same page here, Old Ollie...well said.

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  5. Old Ollie,
    I can share the sentiments your words are saying.
    Sad, but reality can be....

    Eileen :)
    Thank you for commenting at my poem!

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  6. rebuild the bitter
    to blessed ..

    powerful and sense making.

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  7. Ah, short and truthful. Describes family well.

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  8. This is the longing. Well captured.

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