Thursday, September 1, 2011

Volunteers

sunflower volunteers
bend twist towards the sun
rising up over the feeder
from where they fell

10 comments:

  1. Pretty, I can see it and I love the bend, twist imagery and your view of volunteers~ Now you make me wish I had done a yoga poem :D Wise Monk; well done~

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  2. Sunflower volunteers...love that line!
    SC

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  3. Yes, sunflower volunteers. Sunflower is not shy. Sunflower IS....

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  4. Nice creative way to look at it ~

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  5. I love this! I'm with Mary- the first line rocks!

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  6. I see it... in my garden, the cardinals would be orating...

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/09/01/seek-the-son/

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  7. A lovely vision......I have a sunflower in a pot, and it is not nearly as happy as your volunteers!I must set it free!

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  8. Haha...all the sunflowers are my place are volunteers too! Aggressively so!

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  9. Love the way you look at things Ollie....this poem shines! :-)

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  10. Applause. Charming and beautifully stated. Thanks! hugs, pat

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