Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Fall 1

stumble through the forest
whispy warm from the sting
of birthday whisky

8 comments:

  1. love it Birthday Whisky...must say I can remember a few days like that...though not in recent years...you bring back a found memory...bkm

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  2. Oooooh, it makes me want to try it, hee hee! You make it sound so ...... warm!!!!! :) You managed, in a few short lines, to totally convey a mood. Wonderful!

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  3. vivid image,
    love the birthday whisky idea.

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  4. This is absolutely awesome! One of the best things you've written

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  5. Birthday whiskey..new to me but I like the way you inserted into the poem

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  6. Funny! The whiskey was totally unexpected. :D

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  7. awesome haiku - loved whispy warm from the sting / of birthday whisky

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