Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Fall 1

stumble through the forest
whispy warm from the sting
of birthday whisky
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8 comments:

  1. signed...bkmOctober 24, 2010 at 4:57 PM

    love it Birthday Whisky...must say I can remember a few days like that...though not in recent years...you bring back a found memory...bkm

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  2. MaryOctober 24, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    I can picture this!!

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  3. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 24, 2010 at 6:51 PM

    Oooooh, it makes me want to try it, hee hee! You make it sound so ...... warm!!!!! :) You managed, in a few short lines, to totally convey a mood. Wonderful!

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 24, 2010 at 7:43 PM

    vivid image,
    love the birthday whisky idea.

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  5. The Square CornerOctober 24, 2010 at 11:21 PM

    This is absolutely awesome! One of the best things you've written

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  6. Uma AnandaneOctober 25, 2010 at 5:21 AM

    Birthday whiskey..new to me but I like the way you inserted into the poem

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  7. The Reason You ComeOctober 25, 2010 at 9:04 AM

    Funny! The whiskey was totally unexpected. :D

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  8. AnonymousOctober 25, 2010 at 1:21 PM

    awesome haiku - loved whispy warm from the sting / of birthday whisky

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