Thursday, October 29, 2009

Fall 2


the ball slices the air
catch, elbow tuck, run, straight-arm
mud freezes to my knees

4 comments:

  1. Oh ouch! - I felt that. Great haiku!

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  2. Packs a powerful punch:)Made my knees hurt in sympathy!

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  3. wow,
    so fast,
    it hurts,
    well done poetry.

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