Friday, October 30, 2009

Fall 3

wind is slow steady and cold
little girl holds her coat closed
lets go of her witch hat
runs, jumps, to catch it
as it swirls with the leaves

12 comments:

  1. I love this very visual image of the little girl, coat and hat......and the steady wind. Lovely, Ollie. I always love your poems!

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  2. Great imagination, Ollie. Captures childhood especially well.

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  3. Perfect - I can picture that little girl!

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  4. It was the cutest thing ever - a poetic snap shot - Thanks.

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  5. A wonderfully evocative image...one can feel the harsh wind tugging, and hear the leaves rustling...very cool!

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  6. Absolutely beautiful imagery!

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  7. Great Halloween poem; reminds me of a time,when I had less fear, but didn't know that then~

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  8. Old Ollie,
    A lovely Halloween image and a superb skill with so few words!

    Eileen

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