Poems by Brother Ollie: the Tired Monk
The rains have hit on the west coast too........I love that "waylaid sunrise". I expect ours some time in late April, lol.
Walking and awaking in the cool autumn air. The lamp flame guides you to a fuller life. This poem is full of talent!!
with one deft adjustmentventing in sweet airand sweeter lightThere is still hope yet! One can look forward to sweeter things on the morrow certainly!Hank
with one deftadjustment...a wise metaphor for bringing light into our lives...
This fills me with soo much hope!! ❤️
At the end of your poem I do indeed feel thankful! Sometimes it is good to know that there are 'adjustments' we can make.
That adjustment to bring in the lights... like opening the blinds and see the outside... yes we need that in our life too.
I think we need adjustments in our perspective. It looks like rain right now, but the trees are still holding their autumn color.
Nice. Even in rain there is light and hope for adjustment. I like the message in this.
Well, OllieThere you go with another wise choice "...with one deftadjustmentventing in sweet airand sweeter light."Perfect! ZQ
Very nicely done, Ollie. You are a master of capturing atmosphere.
Thanks for helping with the development of Olsonomics.
The rains have hit on the west coast too........I love that "waylaid sunrise". I expect ours some time in late April, lol.
ReplyDeleteWalking and awaking in the cool autumn air. The lamp flame guides you to a fuller life. This poem is full of talent!!
ReplyDeletewith one deft adjustment
ReplyDeleteventing in sweet air
and sweeter light
There is still hope yet! One can look forward to sweeter things on the morrow certainly!
Hank
with one deft
ReplyDeleteadjustment...a wise metaphor for bringing light into our lives...
This fills me with soo much hope!! ❤️
ReplyDeleteAt the end of your poem I do indeed feel thankful! Sometimes it is good to know that there are 'adjustments' we can make.
ReplyDeleteThat adjustment to bring in the lights... like opening the blinds and see the outside... yes we need that in our life too.
ReplyDeleteI think we need adjustments in our perspective. It looks like rain right now, but the trees are still holding their autumn color.
ReplyDeleteNice. Even in rain there is light and hope for adjustment. I like the message in this.
ReplyDeleteWell, Ollie
ReplyDeleteThere you go with another wise choice
"...with one deft
adjustment
venting in sweet air
and sweeter light."
Perfect! ZQ
Very nicely done, Ollie. You are a master of capturing atmosphere.
ReplyDelete