Poems by Brother Ollie: the Tired Monk
You took me there and I could see the whole scene. Loved it.
Great imagery...great mood !....Rall
Ollie,Reads like the opening scene from a movie....especially as the motel lights dim...lights, camera action...excellent!
You are so good at creating a scene the reader can visualize. I especially like the motel lights dimming, then clicking off.
love the mood and tone you set in this - you can feel the scene- Great work.
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You took me there and I could see the whole scene. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery...great mood !....Rall
ReplyDeleteOllie,
ReplyDeleteReads like the opening scene from a movie....especially as the motel lights dim...lights, camera action...excellent!
You are so good at creating a scene the reader can visualize. I especially like the motel lights dimming, then clicking off.
ReplyDeletelove the mood and tone you set in this - you can feel the scene- Great work.
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