Poems by Brother Ollie: the Tired Monk
Oh I so love this! Can see it all, feel the peacefulness and quiet...........see his smile. Beautiful writing, Ollie!
I can imagine the scenes as you say..Nice!
Beautifully illustrated with your words, Ollie.Pamela
I can see the scene and love the ending - 'lost deep in shadow robes '
Wonderful images. Beautiful feeling. Elizabeth
Beautifully crafted poem. Your poem leaves me with a feeling of peacefulness!
I felt I was there ... wonderful.
Ollie,I love the idea of The Tired Monk, lurking in the shadows!Best wishes,Eileen
Powerful lost in deep shadow robe, it is profound and peaceful! Great Job~
I love this!
Nice, peaceful poem. "Lost deep in shadow robes." Exactly like a monk.
You - quiet old monk.Are novices welcome? The throat does tickle.xoerin
I missed these poems while on the road. Nicely done.
Illustrated so nicely with your words!Take careM.R
I want to be a novice again.
Your description is so vivid. I am going to be taking a weeklong workshop at an Abbey starting tomorrow so I imagine this poem will be in my head as I wander among the monks. :)
Wow-worthy work. Again, perfect.
Thanks for helping with the development of Olsonomics.