Tuesday, May 3, 2011

work door



this work door
this daily portal
think paint, rusty, splattered,

heavy
as any temple door
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19 comments:

  1. Brian MillerMay 3, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    and somedays work is as much devotion as any temple...

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  2. Kodjo DeynooMay 3, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    Just how Brian said. Good short piece.

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  3. MarianMay 3, 2011 at 6:06 PM

    ah. and a space so intimate and worn, at times.

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  4. AnonymousMay 3, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    amazing emotion and imagery which rises up before me reading your words which are straight forward, achingly expressed...i can feel the drudgery and yet the devotion...great write...

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  5. UnknownMay 3, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    such a lot of emotion expressed so succinctly thank you

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  6. UnknownMay 3, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    i'll be thinking about this one for awhile...

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  7. PattiKenMay 3, 2011 at 7:11 PM

    Nice. I can feel the heaviness of daily drudgery behind these words.

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  8. FireblossomMay 3, 2011 at 7:39 PM

    I agree with Brian.

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  9. hedgewitchMay 3, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    All work is honorable I was once told, and perhaps in its purest form devotional as well. I'm always amazed at how much you can say with a perfect sparsity of words.

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  10. LauraMay 3, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    short and powerful...much emotion packed into these few words and image.

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  11. UnknownMay 3, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    Every space can be a temple. Every space can be defiled. We choose.

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  12. Sherry Blue SkyMay 3, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    Oh so cool to make that connection!

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  13. ayalaMay 3, 2011 at 10:12 PM

    I also agree with Brian.

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  14. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 12:32 AM

    Perfectly packed with power! Very much enjoyed.

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  15. JinksyMay 4, 2011 at 4:44 AM

    And an interesting photo to consolidate it...

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  16. signed...bkmMay 4, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    Nice temple....my Beloved Pens have lost....but I am glad that Sid the Kid has a nice break to get ready for next year.....bkm

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  17. UnknownMay 4, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    I dig concentrated poetry like this. Less is more, and this is definitely more. Excellent! :D

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  18. AnnaMay 4, 2011 at 11:06 PM

    so much said in so little words!

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  19. Human ParadoxMay 6, 2011 at 10:18 PM

    Nice. Alot of monks don't realize that the temple is where the shit goes down.

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