Thursday, April 14, 2011

a monk's first kiss

up the hill
past the bell
hands brush
by the long grass
deep sleeves tussle

triggers

a long sought kiss




To the future Abbess; that ensnarer of men.
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15 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyApril 14, 2011 at 6:33 PM

    I love it, Ollie. Your Abbess is beautiful, for certain! Enough to distract a monk considerably, I would think:)But lovely to meditate upon.

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  2. Eileen T O'Neill .....April 14, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    Old Ollie,
    I am so pleased to read that the tired monk, has found some wonderful company to share all his daily duties with......

    Eileen

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  3. Rinkly RimesApril 15, 2011 at 2:29 AM

    What a wealth of stories lies behind your title.....IF it's truthful!

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  4. Isabel DoyleApril 15, 2011 at 4:19 AM

    O Brother - the long grass, the long sought kiss, the life-long good-bye

    lovely

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  5. UnknownApril 15, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    Romance...

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  6. Salem LorotApril 15, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    It is now official: The Tired Monk is not after all tired in matters of love.

    Wonderful piece, Monk.

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  7. LolamouseApril 15, 2011 at 2:18 PM

    Even monks love romance! This is good to know!

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  8. JingleApril 15, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    superb.

    the word flow and the crispy feel, are all perfect.

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  9. M. A. S.April 16, 2011 at 3:20 AM

    Talk about naughty.

    I like the "deep sleeves tussle."

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  10. UnknownApril 16, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    Lovely.

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  11. EllaApril 16, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    Unexpected, I loved it~

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  12. madhumakhiApril 17, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    Nice and brief.

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  13. MarianApril 20, 2011 at 11:15 AM

    oh, yes, very very nice.

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  14. AndreasApril 24, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    May I say,, just between us men, this is very sweet. Of course I'm a man in love, so by all means Ignore me.

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  15. FireblossomApril 28, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    LOL @ ensnarer. I bet you just kicked and screamed. *rolleyes*

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