Monday, October 11, 2010

The Tired Monk and the Stars 3.0

colder winds blow
quaking aspens quake
rustle and rattle of unseen leaves
whiskey breath clouds
the optics


  1. These are three awesome pieces. Well done!!

  2. "Whiskey breath clouds" Good name for a Smith Falls country punk band. Nice work OO!

  3. Hello,
    How are you?

    I invite you to join our poetry community at,
    It would be great for you to take a look at our playground, sign in to follow if you wish,
    our major event is Monday Poetry Potluck, you are encouraged to link in one of your favorite poem, or write a poem over the weekend that is related to our theme, (week 6 is seven sins), hope to see you stop by, do let us know when you do and leave us a note so that one of our officials gets back to you....

    Our Monday poetry potluck is open from Sunday 8pm to Wednesday, 8am. you have 60 hours to submit one quality poem and share.
    Writing your entry ahead of the time and link in as early as possible would get you more traffic and is strongly recommend...please let me know via email if you have further questions...

    Happy Weekend.
    U Rock!

  4. Welcome to our potluck party by linking in a poem, old one works well. Thanks!

    hope to see you in,
    we are closing within 12 hours, hurry up.
    an old poem would do, keep your talent shining.


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