Friday, October 8, 2010

Fall 3.0

sandals sweep
through breezy leaves
of the forest floor
sun undims the world
colours creep
reveals the redness
of my robes
i sink
into the leaves
a perfect blend

8 comments:

  1. I love it! Love "sun undims the world", and the image of your sandals and robes sinking into the leaves...........very colorful. Perfection.

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  2. I like this very much.

    ... 'colours creep, reveals the redness of my robes' I love the imagery. :-)

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  3. The forest floor love that....this is wonderous...i love it! :-)

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  4. gosh if I could only go to this place.... "sun undims the world"... fabulous use of written imagery!

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  5. I love this; really can visualize fall's beauty~

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  6. old ollie,
    A beautiful autumnal feel to your colourful words.

    Lovely image..
    Best wishes, Eileen

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  7. Oh yes, by reading this poem - I know autumn is here for sure. Lovely


    Wysteria

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